so here's the new song..wow I haven't written one in quite a while...Please please please tell me if there is anything at all I need to change or anything else...just tell me what you think...
THE LETTER I NEVER WROTE
So many things I, wish to say now. So many more I, cannot explain. So goodnight my love,Iv'e gone to sleep. Sincerely yours, not yours to keep. I'll close my eyes,-and no, not tonite. Tomorrow's almost here. It's not my choice.
I've seen your face love. A horrid sight. (and) I beg for the stars, to bring back the night. So I'm leaving you the way you were. before.I.destroyed your life. Goodnight my broken heart. Try not to cry. As I fight to close my eyes.
Crawling out of this hole. That you've so kindly, burried me in. Under the earth. Forced to again begin.
And doesn't it kill you? And doesn't it kill you?
I've seen your face love. A horrid sight. (and) I beg for the stars, to bring back the night. So I'm leaving you the way you were. before.I.destroyed your life. Be strong my breaking heart. try not to cry. As I fight to close my eyes.
Goodnight my love,Goodnight my heart. It's killing me. I can now see. everything I've been hiding from.
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